Week #8 Research paper FIRST DRAFT

So this week was the week we finally got to write our paper, I found it a little hard at first because I didn't knew how to started, but as I checked my notes, I found out that I had a solid thesis, here's a copy of My First Draft of the paper,  for any suggestions of what I need to fix please comment bellow

Work Cited

This week's task for class was to Work cite our sources, I've unsuccessfully gather enough material for my essay, but I have 5 good sources that I'm definitely using on my paper. My task now is to identify what other two sources might be useful complete the assignment before the rough draft is due, so I'll have another tough week ahead of me. Here's my Work Citation

Week #7 Outline

I'm a couple of days late with my outline since I was catching up with the review of other of my assignments, but I finally cached up with a lot of my work, here's a copy of the outline rough draft, there's the "Health" section that I'm not sure about keeping, but I' decided to leave it until I do further research on it.