Tuesday, December 3, 2013

Research Paper; final Draft

This week is the week we've all been waiting for, in which we'll present our final paper. During the conference, I received very important advices of how to improve my paper, which included that I was missing the importance of ethnicity in the Middle-class families. Another part in which I modified a little was my conclusion, in which I was missing a clear explanation of where is the Middle-class heading, information that was previously said in my last paragraph, but I had to repeat over the conclusion. Overall, this class taught me a lot of how to organize ideas, and important techniques that, somehow will be applied in my future classes, thank you Ginger!

1 comment:

  1. Hey Christian,

    I definitely found the last class with Ginger helpful in understanding where most people (and I) went wrong in our approach to most of our papers, The sheet given out also provided some wonderful and crucial details to key aspects of the paper that I haven't given much thought to before as well. Congrats on the completion of your paper, too!

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